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@@ -90,10 +90,11 @@ then read our page '<a href="/help/unhappy">Unhappy about the response you got?<
<a href="http://www.ico.gov.uk/for_the_public/access_to_official_information.aspx">access to official information</a>
pages on the Information Commisioner's website.</p>
-<p>If you're requesting information from a Scottish public authority, the process for accessing official information is very
-similar to that to the rest of the UK, however there are a few notable differences (especially around time limits for compliance and
-<a href="#real_name">pseudonyms</a>). The <a href="http://www.itspublicknowledge.info/nmsruntime/saveasdialog.asp?lID=1858&amp;sID=321">Scottish Information Commissioner's website</a>
-contains specific guidance on the Scottish legislation.</p>
+<p>If you're requesting information from a Scottish public authority,
+the process is very similar. Notable differences are around time
+limits for compliance and <a href="#real_name">pseudonyms</a>.
+See the <a href="http://www.itspublicknowledge.info/nmsruntime/saveasdialog.asp?lID=1858&amp;sID=321">Scottish
+Information Commissioner's guidance</a> for details.</p>
</dd>
<dt id="data_protection">Can I request information about myself? <a href="#data_protection">#</a> </dt>
@@ -189,9 +190,12 @@ question. If nothing else, it avoids the risk of an authority being picky,
ignoring the guidance and refusing your request.
</p>
-<p>For requests to Scottish public authorities you should ideally provide a real name, especially if you forsee the possibility of
-complaining later to the Scottish Information Commissioner - based on <a href="http://www.whatdotheyknow.com/request/advice_on_pseudonyms">legal advice</a>
-they received in 2005, they will not accept complaints where they find out that the request was originally made under a pseudonym.
+<p>For requests to Scottish public authorities you should ideally provide a
+real name, especially if you forsee the possibility of complaining later to the
+Scottish Information Commissioner - based on
+<a href="http://www.whatdotheyknow.com/request/advice_on_pseudonyms">legal advice</a>
+they received in 2005, they will not accept complaints where they find out that
+the request was originally made under a pseudonym.
</p>
</dd>