3 files changed, 14 insertions, 7 deletions
diff --git a/app/views/help/about.rhtml b/app/views/help/about.rhtml
index 1f4e1df13..377703620 100644
--- a/app/views/help/about.rhtml
+++ b/app/views/help/about.rhtml
@@ -76,7 +76,7 @@ pages on the Information Commisioner's website.
 
 <dt id="data_protection">Can I request information about myself?</dt>
 
-<dd>No. Requests made using WhatDoTheyKnow are public, made under the
+<dd>Not using this site. Requests made using WhatDoTheyKnow are public, made under the
 Freedom of Information Act, and cannot help you find information about a
 private individual. If you would like to know what information a public
 authority holds about yourself, you should make a "Subject Access Request" in
@@ -96,7 +96,7 @@ you manage FOI requests in secret, then <a href="/help/contact">contact us</a>.
 
 </dl>
 
-<h1 id="privacy">Privacy Questions</h1>
+<h1 id="privacy">Privacy policy</h1>
 
 <dl>
 
@@ -115,14 +115,14 @@ about the site or related mySociety services. We will never give or sell
 your email addresses to anyone else, unless we are obliged to by law, or you
 ask us to.</dd>
 
-<dt>Why will my name appear publically on the site?</dt>
+<dt id="public_request">Why will my name appear publically on the site?</dt>
 
 <dd>It means that someone researching the same area can get in touch with you,
 and maybe give you more information or ideas relating to your request.  Also,
 we're going to publish the response with the name of the civil servant who
 wrote it, so it seems only fair that your name should be public too!
 Therefore, we encourage you to use your real name, but you may use a pseudonym
-if you would like to be anonymous.
+if you would like to be anonymous. 
 </dd>
 
 <dt id="tracking">Why does the list of things that I'm tracking appear publically on the site?</dt>
diff --git a/app/views/request/new.rhtml b/app/views/request/new.rhtml
index 5d2b85ddb..d36f1142a 100644
--- a/app/views/request/new.rhtml
+++ b/app/views/request/new.rhtml
@@ -72,7 +72,7 @@
     </p>
 
     <p class="form_note">
-        <Strong>Can I request information about myself?</strong>
+        <strong>Can I request information about myself?</strong>
         <a href="/help/about#data_protection">No! (Click here for details)</a> 
     </p>
 
diff --git a/app/views/request/preview.rhtml b/app/views/request/preview.rhtml
index ef12f89ce..bac3a0a64 100644
--- a/app/views/request/preview.rhtml
+++ b/app/views/request/preview.rhtml
@@ -2,7 +2,14 @@
 
 <% form_for(:info_request, @info_request, :html => { :id => 'preview_form' }  ) do |f| %>
     
+
     <h1>Now preview your request</h1>
+    <ul>
+    <li>Check you haven't included any <strong>personal information</strong>.</li>
+    <li>Your name, request and any responses will appear in <strong>search engines</strong>
+        (<a href="/help/about#public_request">details</a>).
+    </li>
+    </ul>
 
     <% fields_for :outgoing_message do |o| %>
     <p class="outgoing_message_preview">
@@ -14,8 +21,8 @@
     </p>
     <% end %>
 
-    <p><strong>Note:</strong> Your request and any response will be
-    displayed publically on this website.</p>
+    <p><strong>Privacy note:</strong> If you want to request private information about
+    yourself then <a href="/help/about#data_protection">click here</a>.
 
     <p>
     <%= f.hidden_field(:title) %>