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| author | francis <francis> | 2009-03-06 15:35:47 +0000 |
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| committer | francis <francis> | 2009-03-06 15:35:47 +0000 |
| commit | 06b268068d2fb9e748f8a03224470425817e6a30 (patch) | |
| tree | c816cd13c53b71faf1f9e3ac0ff226f667e69a3f | |
| parent | 524250e33bb83841af2d565103fd01366ac2172b (diff) | |
Tweak wording a bit following feedback from ICO
| -rw-r--r-- | app/views/request/new.rhtml | 5 |
1 files changed, 3 insertions, 2 deletions
diff --git a/app/views/request/new.rhtml b/app/views/request/new.rhtml index 2ff56e62a..ad00f3202 100644 --- a/app/views/request/new.rhtml +++ b/app/views/request/new.rhtml @@ -32,6 +32,9 @@ <% end %> </li> <li>Write your request in <strong>simple, precise language</strong>. + <li>Ask for <strong>specific</strong> documents or information, this site is not suitable + for general enquiries. + </li> <% if @info_request.public_body.info_requests.size > 0 %> <li>Browse <%= link_to "other requests", public_body_url(@info_request.public_body) %> to '<%= h(@info_request.public_body.name) %>' @@ -44,8 +47,6 @@ <li>Keep it <strong>focussed</strong>, if you ask for everything it might cost too much and you might get nothing. </li> - <li>Ask for <strong>particular documents</strong>, rather than general questions. - </li> <li>This site is <strong>public</strong>, everything you type (except your email address) and any response will be published. </li> </ul> |